Feedback on updated web site please.

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  1. Jeff Randall

    Jeff Randall ESEE Knives / Randall's Adventure & Training Staff Member

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    I caught a couple of misspelled words on the services pages.

    "services are lsted belowe"
     
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  2. AddictedToSteel

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    "Discover Your Farm"

    Did you mean "Our"?


    "The King Farm is a multi-generational family farm located in South Dartmouth, Massachusetts. With family roots digging back in the early 19th century, The King Farm has grown through many facets of farming since the early 1800s, but the farm is now focused on providing agricultural products and services directly to our customers."

    Instead of "in" maybe "to" or "into"?


    "Working with 120 acres of beautiful farm land, The King Farm offered seasonal vegetables at our roadside farm stand, hay for horses, goats, cows and all manner of farm animals and yard projects, and we sell hardwood cord wood and all sizes of field stone."

    Should it be "offered" or "offers"?
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    Services:

    "The King Farm offers agricultural-related services in addition to our agricultural products. While the services vary, typical services are lsted belowe. Please call or email for pricing quotes."

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    I like more contrast between the prompts in the fields and the background color.

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    Looks pretty good.
     
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    I really like the site. And that's coming from someone who complains constantly about most websites. It's simple, yet has everything it's needs. Great pictures and overall classy feel to the layout, yet not overdone. Which is where, in my opinion, most sites go wrong. It's drives me nuts when a site is a nightmare to navigate because there is so much unnecessary junk cluttering up the site. Or you have to hit multiple tabs to get to a single product or service. There's a few grammatical errors, as mentioned. But other than those, which are a simple fix, I think youve done a great job.
     
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    Two typos in the second sentence of the Services page.

    Other than that, great site.
     
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    works well.
     
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  6. Delkancott

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    Fixed. Thank you.


    The Your farm was purposeful, but I'm still on the fence about it. I fixed the other two you mentioned, thank you.

    Also, regarding the contrast, I had tried to change that before, but the form settings wouldn't allow me to change color, just layout.

    Thanks again everyone.
     

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